sadness ... again!!

sadness ... again!!

A Poem by brenda

you crush my dreams with a single thunder

you make me realize how incapable i am!

you make me admit my failures and make me want to scream.

 "i am not perfect"

 

you make me want to lie in the floor and wish i was never born.

a rude way to treat me.

 a failure, everytime you look at me.

 

why cant you accept the way i am?

let me, not be perfect all the time!

thats why i am tied to fear, because of your past that you led me in.

thanks to you i can not express myself.

because of your silly remainders that i was perfect back then.

 

© 2011 brenda


Author's Note

brenda
problems, stuff, felt like writing thing that caused me to be sad oh god!

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Your one confuse child.Text me. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some great thoughts here and love the style :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on April 16, 2011
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brenda
brenda

boredom city:p!!!, FL



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