encouragement to avery valuable man

encouragement to avery valuable man

A Poem by brenda

My old man sat on a porch

The glinting sun was obscuring his pleasant view

He put on his hat

And gaze towards the sky.


He was here now

Nothing ever bothered him

At least I thought that.


Encouragement words sank in my heart

And his wisdom words stayed in my mind.

He tells me I am braver, I can do and be better

He cries whenever something separated our bond of daughter and father.

But my old man you see, had seen the world and knew everything about it.

From evil people who only jealousy was their sickness to kind hearted people  


And now that I finally feel greater like he wants me too

I want to say father I love you

You can still have your chance

Now show the world that you are braver

And that you can do better.

© 2011 brenda

Author's Note

i send this to that contest tht i told you guys and this is for my father :)

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What a dedication, totally adore the content. Immense and good luck :)

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Added on August 9, 2011
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