Take a bow

Sparkling eyes, with curling hairs

Handsome face, with many imperfections’ that you ace

Wide grin to charm not showing the real harm

 

Word that soothed my self esteem

When in reality were all lies

The show is over darling,

Your lines are just forgotten memories to me

I know your trick now

Bow like a gentlemen and let me clap

Because you like a dagger with your words and promises went through my heart

And now the blood is gushing out

Bow down, there’s no one applauding you now…

 

Author's Note

inspired byt ake a bow and a teu story also meantto rhyme but never really acomplished it :p

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

Wow. A very powerful and poignant poem you wrote. This was quite an amazing read, and I felt every ounce of emotion reading this. You were able to express your anger over the situation, but also able to express your empowerment you gained because of it. Great job!

[Raindrop]

I definitely felt the hurt! You really got the emotion through. I like how at the end, you are victorious..even though you're hurt, he's the one left standing alone on the stage. :)

[Muse]

A rule breaker of a poet, I like you. I decided to say "to hell" with all the rhymes when it comes to poetry. And since then, have created some of my best work. Great read honey.

[alexlessah]

Nice job, I like this.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful piece, love the insight :)

[Amit Parmessur]

good one too Brenda, again.
But what do you mean by curling hairs? I guess it's hair :) better.

[sugar]

damn i read this agian meaning 2x hahah and i still think good job, when i saw the title i was like hmm rihanna? oooohh i likeeeee