astronomer

I LOVED YOU. I LOVED YOU. I LOVE YOU.

BUT I AM JUST A DUMB LITTLE POET WHO CHASES THE STARS IN THE SKY WITH INSIGNIFICANT WORDS THAT SEW MY MOUTH SHUT. I AM THE ASTRONOMER OBSESSING OVER SOMETHING HE CAN NEVER TOUCH AND CARESS AND HOLD AND LOVE. I AM SO F*****G IN LOVE WITH YOU AND I CAN NEVER HAVE YOU.

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[Phill Oz O'fee]

Unrequited love or one-sided love is love that is not openly reciprocated or understood as such by the adored. The beloved may not be aware of the admirer's deep and strong romantic affection, or may consciously reject it. Yours is a sad write reflecting the frustrations of such a situation – strongly emphasised by the use of capital letters throughout! Kudos for a vivid and honest write …

[macyblue]

I'm glad that my emotions came across in my writing style. Thank you!

[AcasualPawn]

I love physics
Because i respect god.

I AM SO F*****G IN LOVE WITH YOU AND I CAN NEVER HAVE YOU... I will still be shackled with tag of mortal

[Mira]

You portrayed two things very clearly; Honesty and frustration. Atleast, I feel, that you were beginning to grow very frustrated and annoyed of where you are right now...
Writing is a very good channel to express any bottled up emotions, it's perfect for me, as I rarely ever feel like confiding my true emotions to people.
Anyways, this was greatly and you were very to-the-point.
Thank you for the share,
I appreciate it :)
Mira.

[macyblue]

thank you so very much!