Saw her in a dream....

Saw her in a dream....

A Poem by Michael Wright


The heart, broken and alone.

Feeling nothing but pure emptiness.

The soul reaching for her.

Grasping nothing but air.

The body wanting to feel again;

It all seems to be a dream.

Just brief images of her face.

Longing to touch her lips.

The kiss igniting a blaze. 

The sweet smell lingers.

Fingers tips sending shivers.

Sweat beads on the skin.

Within the slumber, everything fades.

I only saw her in my dreams....




© 2015 Michael Wright



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dan
Dreams are poet's best storylines. This piece, though sending positive signals, starts dark and empty. You then mention "dream" and the mood lightens and broadens. Your piece has direct target power. This is going into my library favorites, so thanks for that. take care...dan

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Michael Wright

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dan



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i liked the line The soul reaching for her.
Grasping nothing but air.... really nice piece

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Michael Wright

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts.
nupur chauhan

2 Years Ago

Welcome... 😊
I love writes about dreams. In our dreams there are no limits to what we dream of... to be able to write about it is awesome. I can definitely relate my friend :)

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Michael Wright

2 Years Ago

Thank you However did you like this piece?
AaronFreitas

2 Years Ago

I definitely did... I like the descriptions... sometimes it feels that things we dream feel more int.. read more
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dan
Dreams are poet's best storylines. This piece, though sending positive signals, starts dark and empty. You then mention "dream" and the mood lightens and broadens. Your piece has direct target power. This is going into my library favorites, so thanks for that. take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michael Wright

2 Years Ago

Thank you Dan
Have you written a book of poems?

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Michael Wright

2 Years Ago

No, I have not as of yet. I actually have one planned. If I can get my mind together and do it. read more

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Michael Wright
Michael Wright

Springfield, MA



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I am 50, single Retired, I am a novice to this writing world. I am learning each day. I do not share all my writing with you. I look forward to chatting with many of you. I will only review writin.. more..

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