The Star

The Star

A Poem by Manasa.L

Shining bright

Cry, laugh, sin 
tags of the frails
never define her.

She, mother, sister
derailed her to Kitchen
bound to customs.

Years have passed
machines rule over us
still chains confined.

Rose, says her
ye protecting thorns around
cause She pain.

Untie the knots
the butterfly from cocoon
She the star.

© 2017 Manasa.L

Author's Note

A women has to be set free to know her powers

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This Poem reads like the cycle of life and is a beautiful tribute to someone close to you. I love your choice of words. Women will always be the superior of the human race we are the life givers and when we are older we are the keeper of the light for the next generation. Beautiful Poetry

Sheer Terror

Posted 10 Months Ago

TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

10 Months Ago

No Thank You

10 Months Ago

We will be keep thanking each other and will never end
TerryDarcy-Ryan   akaSheerTerror

10 Months Ago

Alright you can have the final Thank you
dear Manasa... Women are very nourishing, and men can be, also.
Men are very vulnerable to the charms of a woman. Women are likewise vulnerable to men. Sometimes nature gets confused... in the creation process. We need to go with the flow and cherish life. Your poetry touches softly on our being a Star. When the night is the darkest, the Star shines the brightest. truly, Pat

Posted 11 Months Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

dear Manasa... I agree with the comments of the other poets also. There are times when it is diffic.. read more

11 Months Ago

Thank you....:)
Patricia Wedel

11 Months Ago

You are very welcome dear heart.
truly, Pat
Yes, freedom is certainly necessary for any human being's proper development.
Beautifully expressed, Manasa.
A fine piece of work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

Indeed people need freedom not to be chained in customs and beliefs. Thank you JY:)
lot of truth in this. we all need to be set free in order to be all that we can be. time marches on, things change and stars must shine.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

yes indeed thank you Pete!
Yep I agree, They are the beautiful creations here....
Sometimes with fishy brains, hahahahaha......
And every lady deserves respect...
Thank you for your write on women's day..:)

Posted 1 Year Ago

0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


1 Year Ago

Thank you for your time and gentle words.
yes everybody deserves it

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Added on March 8, 2017
Last Updated on March 8, 2017
Tags: cry, laugh, define, kitchen, confined, thorns, untie, star



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