just love

just love

A Poem by manisha

Dreaming about someone
Far away in the world
I have never seen you
But i feel your presence
I wanna hug you kiss you
I am passionate Abou you
No night i have ever spent
Without ur thoughts
I imagined you in my arms
You will never know me
But i know one thing
You are somewhere aware of me
Its enough for me
I just loved you
I love you
I will love you
But i wish i could see you once
I could hold you for once.

© 2016 manisha



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manisha
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It's a beauty for someone important coming to your life....I enjoyed..:)

Posted 8 Months Ago


manisha

8 Months Ago

thanks i m still waiting for that important one thanks
oh god, you have no idea what have you written.
i can completely relate to this.
very beautiful and touching.
loving someone you haven't met is brave as well as pious enough in your heart because this kind of love is not judgmental.
applauds!

Posted 8 Months Ago


manisha

8 Months Ago

thanks for your i am glad you liked it.
You reminded me of my days when I would think the same.......I like your honesty to express such true words. Well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


manisha

8 Months Ago

thank you so much. now i am relieved at least someone thinks like me. haha i am glad u liked it
Najam Us Saher

8 Months Ago

Yes and you gave me an inspiration to write about those time of my days. ☺ You're welcome 😊
It is a good poem about longing and unfilled love. I like it, and it shows the passion you feel towards someone who you know you will never see in the physical world.

Well done

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for ur review. its true unfilled love. I hope u will read more
'I wish I could see you once,I wish I could hold you once.'
A nice write built with profound feelings. Beautiful write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks deep glad u liked it. Hope u will read more
Beautiful words! Love the feeling on honesty and passion in this poesy! Great write!

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks cyprian i m glad u liked it i hope u will read more:)
My mom met the love of her life at age 79 & it lasted until he died when she was 93. That has always given me the kind of hope expressed in your message. Another thing I'm reminded of -- to me, God's love is this state of mind you're describing . . . He is always there to provide a ton of the romantic love that we're craving, just look around at all the trees & flowers & scents & breezes . . . surely He is wooing us with all this beauty in the world. When we are filled up with such gratitude, then it's more likely our channels will be open when the perfect human happens along someday. Your poem describes a person who is keeping the pump primed for the possibilities.

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for your review i m glad u liked it
I find your poems very relatable, especially this one. I have been in the same situation and have had the same thoughts before.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks for ur review. I am happy u can relate this
We have this feeling that someone out there is made for us. One day in this walk of life you may run into that person who up till now resides in your dreams.
Nicely written

Posted 1 Year Ago


manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks shabeeh i m glad u liked it
Beautiful poem . I know how it feels when you miss someone too badly.
The poem conveys feelings and emotions beautifully.
Nice one



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

manisha

1 Year Ago

Thanks teja
Teja

1 Year Ago

You are welcome

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