just love

Dreaming about someone
Far away in the world
I have never seen you
But i feel your presence
I wanna hug you kiss you
I am passionate Abou you
No night i have ever spent
Without ur thoughts
I imagined you in my arms
You will never know me
But i know one thing
You are somewhere aware of me
Its enough for me
I just loved you
I love you
I will love you
But i wish i could see you once
I could hold you for once.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems. Please review it. Constructive criticism are always welcomed.

Reviews

[Surya]

It's a beauty for someone important coming to your life....I enjoyed..:)

[manisha]

thanks i m still waiting for that important one thanks

[APOORVA]

oh god, you have no idea what have you written.
i can completely relate to this.
very beautiful and touching.
loving someone you haven't met is brave as well as pious enough in your heart because this kind of love is not judgmental.
applauds!

[manisha]

thanks for your i am glad you liked it.

[Najam Us Saher]

You reminded me of my days when I would think the same.......I like your honesty to express such true words. Well done.

[manisha]

thank you so much. now i am relieved at least someone thinks like me. haha i am glad u liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes and you gave me an inspiration to write about those time of my days. ☺ You're welcome 😊

[H.L. Cerveise]

It is a good poem about longing and unfilled love. I like it, and it shows the passion you feel towards someone who you know you will never see in the physical world.

Well done

[manisha]

Thanks for ur review. its true unfilled love. I hope u will read more

[Deep]

'I wish I could see you once,I wish I could hold you once.'
A nice write built with profound feelings. Beautiful write.

[manisha]

Thanks deep glad u liked it. Hope u will read more

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful words! Love the feeling on honesty and passion in this poesy! Great write!

[manisha]

Thanks cyprian i m glad u liked it i hope u will read more:)

[barleygirl]

My mom met the love of her life at age 79 & it lasted until he died when she was 93. That has always given me the kind of hope expressed in your message. Another thing I'm reminded of -- to me, God's love is this state of mind you're describing . . . He is always there to provide a ton of the romantic love that we're craving, just look around at all the trees & flowers & scents & breezes . . . surely He is wooing us with all this beauty in the world. When we are filled up with such gratitude, then it's more likely our channels will be open when the perfect human happens along someday. Your poem describes a person who is keeping the pump primed for the possibilities.

[manisha]

Thanks for your review i m glad u liked it

[William Liston]

I find your poems very relatable, especially this one. I have been in the same situation and have had the same thoughts before.

-William Liston

[manisha]

Thanks for ur review. I am happy u can relate this

[Shabeeh Haider]

We have this feeling that someone out there is made for us. One day in this walk of life you may run into that person who up till now resides in your dreams.
Nicely written

[manisha]

Thanks shabeeh i m glad u liked it

[Teja]

Beautiful poem . I know how it feels when you miss someone too badly.
The poem conveys feelings and emotions beautifully.
Nice one

[manisha]

Thanks teja

[Teja]

You are welcome