The wind

The wind

A Poem by marlayesterday

Where will this take me?
to the moon or to the sea,
Let the wind decide.

© 2012 marlayesterday


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Nice job.

Made me think of The Wind by The Fray

I'm always thinkin of music

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sometimes not knowing what will happen is the greatest rush... awesome haiku.

Posted 11 Years Ago


marlayesterday

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Ah, the nebulous "this"... don't we wish we all knew the answer that one. Letting the wind decide can be a good approach it but I have to wonder why the menu is limited. But, as it stands there are words of power displayed prominently so I have to like that. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Somethings in life that are not in our control

'The wind'

Definately a force not to be reckoned with and what ever the outcome your destiny will be determined by Mother Nature...

Lovely way of looking at life... thanks for sharing

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marlayesterday

11 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Oh very poignant and technically correct. There is a lot of meaning packed in there. Just wonderful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

marlayesterday

11 Years Ago

Thank you. I appreciate it. :)

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