life

this poem is abut my life

life hates me
and i return the favor in kind,
from the depths of my mind,
brimming and boiling,
hateing and toiling,
waiting to overflow,
just about to blow,
from the depths of my mind,
i just cant find,
what it is like,
but when i try,
all i do is die
a little inside
and so many times ive tried,
but all i want is to feel,
but im just not real,
what did i do,
did i do something wrong,
then it rang like a gong,
my life was not meant to be,
so i shall see.

Author's Note

thank you for reading. yes i know that my is arnt capitalised. i just didnt feel like capitalising them. please review.

Reviews

[Loner]

Pain is you .... or rather u are pain ....
a great write written in agony of torn down emotions.....

[THE-NAMELESS]

this is a really good poem , you have talent