I miss you with all my heart...

This poem is for my dad...R.I.P.

This poem is for my dad.

I always think of him when I'm sad
because, my mom said that when I was a baby and I cried,
he would sing me a funny lullaby.
Even if my memory of him is very thin,
I will still miss him...

My friend's dad's would ask me, wheres yours?
I don't mind to say it, he's in a better place, for sure.
It's hard for me to write this poem.
 I cry but, still go on.

I love you dad with all my heart.
I know you hear me cause were not that far apart.
You will always be in my heart...

Author's Note

Thank you for reading.

Reviews

[s y e]

Awww! This is really sad :'( Had me close to tears!
Alot of emotion in here and it is very touching!!

[Alewis]

this was very sad and im sorry for you

[Hannah Paige]

A little weak on the literature side, but definitely a strong show of emotion

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that was beautiful a few grammar problems there but you can re-edit anyway i know how it is to miss your father, and how awkward it is to see someone else with theirs. Remember to go beyond your capabilities.