Suicide

You think you are better than everyone else

Everyone else is scared of you

You think you are above everyone else

Everyone else is afraid to speak up

Up is what you think you are doing

You are doing the worst to people

People don't know how to step out of there comfort zone

Zone 1- You bully people

People aren't brace enough

Enough is enough

Enough is what you are

You are the worst person ever

Ever think of how to think of others before yourself

Yourself is what you put before anything

Anything else I can think of?

I can think of a lot

A lot of misery you put those people in

You put those people in danger

Danger isn't good

Good people do bad things

Bad things including suicide

Suicide meaning they kill themselves

They kill themselves because of you

Because of you, people hang themselves

People hang themselves or they cut themselves

They cut themselves enough to lose a lot of blood

Lose a lot of blood so they can't go on in life

Life is what everyone needs

Everyone needs happiness

Happiness is what you are taking out of their lives

Their lives are going to be lost

Lost is what most people are already

Already, people are dying

Dying because of you

You don't know how to treat people with respect

Respect is something you need to learn

You need to learn a lot of things, like being human

Human qualities aren't perfect, but they aren't mean

Mean like you

You are the type of person I am just sick of

I am just sick of all this disrespect

Disrespect is your main quality

Your main quality is destruction

Destruction can be demonizing

Demonizing figures make people go crazy

Crazy also leads to suicide

Suicide caused by demonizing is painful

Painful demonizing

Demonizing is when whoever is bullying you, they are tormenting you from inside

Inside you hear the voices

The voices of your tormentor

Your tormentor is your bully

Your bully is your tormentor

Your tormentor gets inside your head

Your head is its feeding place

Its feeding place is where it feeds on its victims every though

Its victims every thought are eaten up and changed

Changed into suicidal thoughts

Suicidal thoughts that kill their victims, but never itself

Its never dies, it just keeps feeding

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but it's a little long. I'd recommend either splitting this up into stanzas or cutting a few of the more unnecessary lines, as the piece begins to grate on the reader after a while. You have a good start here, there's just a little bit of polishing left to do.

[Mellie]

Thanks, I will deffintaly take that into consideration. :)

[Calypso]

Well done.
Keep expressing your emotions.