God's Nuclear Winter Without Verbs

Up and about on the eighth day,
time for a stroll in the dark,
across the wide windy waste
of ice-bound body parts.

Infinitely better than Pompeii.
A smile of triumph on his face.
Peace on Earth at last and no more
f*****g prayers at midnight.

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Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

This paints a stark picture of where we are heading. The anti religious overtones may suggest either a non believer and Darwinian or the opposite, someone who sees God as all powerful and fed up with his humans. Thus he punishes them by placing them in a nuclear winter.

[Gerald Parker]

Thanks for commenting, John. I rarely contribute to this these days and I'm surprised you and your talented offspring do. I recommend UKAuthors for better responses. It's been struggling for numbers lately and could do with some new input.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Ok will take a look. My son can write and hopefully will. Many thanks.

[Gee]

Never fear Gerald I’m here, not very wise, ill educated but willing to read, and, well I’m deducing post Armageddon and peace on earth at last. Just the ‘roaches and silence.

[Gerald Parker]

Thanks for stopping by and commenting, Gee.

[Gee]

No problem, nice when people have a butchers and comment, frustrating when nothing written ..