The world is watching

The world is watching

A Poem by disheveledApathy

Home is behind us
The world lies ahead
As the shadows gather beneath the setting sun
The darkness closes in
And we are here to fight it back

Home is behind us
The world lies ahead
So we fight, laughing as we die
Crying as we fall
Brave heroes to the finish

Home is behind us 
The world lies ahead
Know the father's anguish
And see the red clouds start to rain
On a kingdom that will fall before it rises from the ashes
Of its defeat

© 2012 disheveledApathy


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and now i know what you were talking about, good

Posted 11 Years Ago


The difference between living and dying is time...dying is only a part of living but living isn't part of dying. It's what must go on before and after the fact. I enjoyed reading this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes, this does immortalize his courage. Before I read your note my first thoughts were that this was about men leaving home to go into battle. Wonderful write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


disheveledApathy

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :D

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Added on December 20, 2012
Last Updated on December 27, 2012
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Melbourne, FL



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