my love

love poem dedicated to my fiance

there is nothing

like this love

we both share for one another

this love, so blissfull

it can only compare

to the elagant and peacefull

rise of the sun

my love for you will always linger on

through time you will feel it grow stronger

 

 

Reviews

[Helena]

A loving Valentine's dedication indeed for your fiance! Sweet and beautiful!
Thank you for submitting this to my Valentine's contest! ~ Helena

[Dizzy]

Reminds me of what I always feel. =) I like it.

[Jessica]

Beautiful. I remember feeling like this at one time. I love the metaphors and the imagery. You did a good job of making the feeling tangible. Excellent write!