Just Tuesdays usual questions ....

Just Tuesdays usual questions ....  

I never understood the term 'give up'

Well I guess that made me ignorant

Or maybe I was blinded by childish acts

Maybe I was just blind in general

Or I could of been in denial 

The truth is I don't know what I thought then

But I know what I think now 

Most would call it tragic 

I wouldn't say that in truth...

I would say that I hit a minor slope, but then I realize...

  Well I realize that  it's just instinctual denial

The actual truth would take years to find the correct words 

that could barely...Be good enough

But if a stranger would ask

"My dear why are you depressed?"

"My dear why are you angry?"

 "My dear why are you so dark in thought?"

"My dear why would you let this happen?"

"My dear why watch yourself fall apart?"

Well I would say that if I knew the answers...

do you honestly think I would be here? 

And I would tell him about what I gathered from his office

That he soon will be forced to sign those divorce papers on his desk

Or maybe I would point out the texts the 16 year old girl outside keeps sending him

Or maybe I would tell him that I am observant and feel the emotions of those around me

Or maybe I will tell him that I am a negative person with anger issues 

Or I could sit in his office and not say a word.... because in truth he will never know what's in my head

 

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

very honest, real, moving piece Micky... it doesn't have to rhyme to have RAW emotion and affect the reader... this one was lovely.... few places I might put punctuation, but with poetry that is up to you... other than that.. one little thing....

"The actual truth would take years to fine the correct words".... did you mean "find" instead of "fine"?...

[micky]

Yes I meant to say find:) Thank you so much April I was nervous about this piece :p

[AprilRN1210]

no need to be nervous.... I always am a little when trying new things, but that is how we learn and grow as writers and I like that you are trying... it is a lovely piece and a great start... keep going Micky... you are going places, and it is awesome to see!! :)
it was my pleasure....

[micky]

Thank you so so so much April for always helping me and being someone to look up to honestly I really appreciate it with all of my heart :}

[AprilRN1210]

I know you do Micky, and that is why I would go out of my way for you... I am just glad I can help you... it is my pleasure, honestly...

[Revolutionary]

there are no words for this except ouch.beautifully written disaster.I would break his phone up his a*s and feel better. Great write love it

[micky]

Thank you so much :)

[Rene Salinas]

Yeah I spot a few errors Micky plus there could be a way to put the idea differently using the same layout. But you know that I would leave that you if you want to. I find the moment of discovery a great time and the fact that you are not writing statement that are old and self contained but questions with potential to change. So it seems like a process that keeps unfolding and all the posssiblities that lay ahead.

Hope fully some answers will come.

Thankyou

[micky]

Thank you Rene I really appreciate it :)

[Ashira Macy]

I am fairly sure this is one of your best pieces as of yet my friend. This was so real and raw, just letting emotions and spite pour through your words. Really amazing.

Well I would say that if I knew the answers...
do you honestly think I would be here?

This line hit home for me in so many ways. I hate when people ask questions like that. Clearly we aren't seeking help because we understand ourselves.

[micky]

Thank you so much Ashira I am glad you like my piece and yes it is so annoying when people ask stupid questions :]

[Malister Mikey]

good job Micky really enjoyed this piece

[micky]

Thanks so much :)

[Jordan Varner]

i absolutely LOVE this. it's a really good piece. :)

[micky]

Thank you Jordan :p