Demon

DEMON

The night air cool and crisp

The thought of eyes in the mist

the creep that craws up your back

sucks your soul

and draws you back

When your hair stands on end

don't brush it off 

cause he will win

Reviews

[Chris]

A GOOD aftertaste... in a dark genre

[Diane]

Thank you so much.

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I love this has an Edgar feel I love to talk as well write this way and your expressing the demons great words as well rhyme choice:)

[Diane]

Thanks so much for your nice review.

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Your very welcome Diane

[R.E. Ray]

Wise counsel in poetic form, Diane. You present a painting we so often create in our head, nature's warning signs. And, when we dismiss those warning signs, we pay dearly, sometimes with life. Good piece. Thanks for sharing.

[Diane]

Yes, I agree and thank you.