Summer Heat

Haiku Summer Heat

Summer heat sizzles

Sending bodies to the beach

To cook in the sun

 

 

 

Beach towels everywhere

Suntan lotion aroma

Captured on the breeze

 

 

 

 

Fun volley ball games

Dig your feet into the sand

When you make your serve

 

 

 

 

Bikini clad girl

And muscular surfer dudes

Cover the landscape

 

 

 

 

Leave with a sunburn

Too much fun for just one day

Should not stayed so long

Reviews

[Anastasia Starlena]

I can feel the sun's rays off of this piece. Very well written. Absolutely a fun summer piece.

[Sister Suzie]

Fantastic, I can feel the heat

[An owl on the moon]

I loved the joy and lightness of this piece! The words, the colors, the theme all moved together so well. Excellent and uplifting!

[Gandré]

this is moving and refreshing stuff.... youth's pleasures.... loved.