No Hope

No Hope

A Story by Natalie
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A 50 word story.

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This always happened in books. 

The girl was bound by larger adversaries.  Her thoughts whirled, paralyzing fear churned in her stomach. 

But she always seemed to have hope.  In my world?  There was none. 

The knife’s teeth dug into my neck, I screamed, and everything went black. 

Blissfully,

blissfully

black.

...

 

© 2011 Natalie


Author's Note

Natalie
Sorry, lame. No excuses, I know.

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Congratulations for winning the 50 worder contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Congratulations on winning the 50-word contest!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Okay, do me a favor, please?

Stop degrading your writing!

I have enjoyed everything I've read so far!!

Have some CONFIDENCE!! k?

Peace n Light,
Wicahpi

ps. Congrats on your award

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't know what the fuss is all about. I like it. Of course that is just my opinion.


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 27, 2009
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