Danceing with No Music On

Dancing with no music on

It came so naturly

The best way to dance he said

As he took my hand

And spun me around

I could feel his heartbeat

Spinning round in circles

Till we got dizzy

No restrictions

Making our own music

Spinning around and around

Its the best way to dance he said

And i have to agree

Reviews

[melissa]

Awww this is a wonderful poem and yah you wrote in my favorite color I love it

[kill the innocents]

short.. you should make it longer.. describe it more.. it'll be better.. :)

[Knoxxeh]

I love this poem i love the start the middle but the ending sticks out to me the most but all and all i love it