A Day At The Creek

Prompts- okay ill bite, Write a poem about a specific but minor memory you have from more than five, but less than ten years ago

the sun was shineing that day
bright, and warm
warm enough
to take a trip to the park
and play in the water
just the three of them
of course,
it was always the three of them

them with their hands clasped
and her ignoring that her two
best friends were happily in love
they sat on the rocks
smileing as the little waterfalls
fell over their backs
soaking their cloths

it was hot,
hot enough to forgoe clothing
and swim in their bathing suites
despite their self concious mind set.
never seeing each other
not clothed in every day apparel

and she was allready stripped down
to a swim suite
that made the other girl feel inferior
yet she pulled her shirt over her head
reveling her less than perfect body
and chubby frame
but he thought she was beautiful
of course, she didnt know it.

quickly hiding under the water
away from the eyes of the one she loved
and the best friend she always wanted
reveling in the peace of being beneth the water
listening to the stream trickle past her

immersed in the river
ignoreing the world
she became comfortable once again
laughing
while trying not to slip on rocks
half drying while remaining half in the water.

slowly the day passed
the sky darkend slightly
leaving the three inseprable teens
sitting on the same rocks
laughing about something the boy had said
wishing that the darned bugs would
Just go away

and then it was over
the sun diped behind the skyline
and it was time to go home
parents were called
kisses exchanged
hugs given out

the day had ended,
leaveing them with yet another summer memory
and a smell
of fairly dirty creek water
and a smile on their faces.

Author's Note

yes it acculy happend. all of it :)
lol

Reviews

[melissa]

That is great poem I am so happy that you had fun s**t I can't remember everything I did back than I wish I could so I can write about it also but I bet no would read though because there was some bad things that happend in my life