Please

Please

A Poem by bella
"

Just a poem to a guy who'll never read this

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Please be honest

Do not tell me you love me

If all it is is lust

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Do not tell me my eyes shine like the sea

When the sparkles are tears you caused

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Do not tell me our love is like the sun and the moons

When our love could not be found in the deepest of oceans

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Do not tell me you’ll stay

If your mind is always out the door

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Do not make empty promises

You know you’ll break

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Don’t call me an angel

Because you’re the devil

Please do not lie


Please be honest

Please do not hurt me

Please stay

Please do not lie






© 2017 bella



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I can relate more than I want to admit.

I sometimes wonder if ppl don't take their words seriously, as if words are seasoning one can dash one day, and shelve another, or if they simply get carried away and mean what they say, but it's fleeting because their hearts aren't rooted, deep or sincere, or perhaps if they're just pathological and used as tentacles of manipulation...or maybe a mix of all.

IMO, such ppl with such words should be confronted.


Instead of sending them a poem, should whack em across the head with a book lol

I like how heartfelt this comes across.

Almost a muffled plea on a pillow.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bella

6 Months Ago

If it was more socially acceptable I would smack him with a book but instead he read this poem and d.. read more
Gee

6 Months Ago

I give you full permission to go whack him with a book on one condition, it is big and heavy.
.. read more
bella

6 Months Ago

Haha if i do i'll send it to you first



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This piece was honesty in its truest form. It was really raw because it was the part of us that wanted such things though never outright. Often we take time and focus on what want and neglect what's truly needed. I liked this. Great read.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Honestly is always best. Great write indeed!!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


I appreciates the sense and emotion of this poem. There's need for honesty if two can thrive. Well articulated.

Posted 4 Months Ago


you is an good writer keep going

Posted 4 Months Ago


Honesty, a lost art to some for some speak hollow words. Sometimes confusion can lead to the lack of knowing if it is a need or a want and that inevitably leads to breaking someone's heart. There is no easy choice at times, even walking away pains in such circumstances :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


that was very good, it was dark and mysteries, u were able to cover a topic which is sometimes hard to talk about :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


I can relate more than I want to admit.

I sometimes wonder if ppl don't take their words seriously, as if words are seasoning one can dash one day, and shelve another, or if they simply get carried away and mean what they say, but it's fleeting because their hearts aren't rooted, deep or sincere, or perhaps if they're just pathological and used as tentacles of manipulation...or maybe a mix of all.

IMO, such ppl with such words should be confronted.


Instead of sending them a poem, should whack em across the head with a book lol

I like how heartfelt this comes across.

Almost a muffled plea on a pillow.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

bella

6 Months Ago

If it was more socially acceptable I would smack him with a book but instead he read this poem and d.. read more
Gee

6 Months Ago

I give you full permission to go whack him with a book on one condition, it is big and heavy.
.. read more
bella

6 Months Ago

Haha if i do i'll send it to you first
It is important to be honest, it is the key towards anyones trust

Posted 6 Months Ago


Promises aren't all they're cracked up to be, sometimes. I've heard too many like you're describing here & so I don't believe that easily anymore. Your poem is hanging on the edge of wanting to believe & losing the trust to do so. It's a masterful dance of hoping & giving up hope. We finish this poem thinking: "this narrator is going to be hurt." Sigh! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 7 Months Ago



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