Remembering Past.......

Sometimes past memories upset you... and you are unable do anything as past is past and it cannot be changed... So you look forward and stop pondering over past with a drink to support your emotions..

Bad thoughts at the wrong time
Arriving at night time just when the clock reads nine
Tear drop flows down the line
Shoulders for support has got no sign

Read and heard things in mind does not penetrate
Even though you are not an illiterate
Troubled mind cannot concentrate
All your mood is demolished like police raid

What can you do when you are too far
Remains only one option and i.e. to go to bar
Anger within strangle my nerves hard
Cannot drink as no money in ATM card

Cool winds keep me calm
Rainy weather acts as a balm
Covering the eyes with my palm
Not to sleep ,but to cry, as there is no harm
Affected by worst seeds, you cannot change the farm
Covered with bad times, you cannot change your life... you are warned!!!!
No matter how it is....This is your life.... try to keep it joyful and warm........

Author's Note

waiting for your views.........

Reviews

[natzky]

wow,this poem of yours is really emotional...great job on this..keep on writing..:)

[Shy Girl]

Remembering tends to become blurred along the outside edges of the stories, I've found. The small details lost or just forgotten...you have given us a good deal of insight through your story with this poem. I truely enjoyed reading it...thank you for the RR :)

[Elaenor Aisling]

Nice write

[Niranjan Menon]

superb lines, excellent theme sankaran.....through this poem u have a given a nice message.keep rocking on..........

[Riley]

This is a great emotional piece. My favorite part is when they go to the bar but with no money so can't drink. Most of the time all you read or hear in music is they go to the bar to get drunk and forget. But there are many people who want to do that but can't because of lack of money. Think it's awesome how you added that. Great job!

[Aditi Mahajan]

Emotions can't be controlled and this can be seen through this poem. Sometimes its better to forget past....

[Garry Maan]

the way it is written.. it really enthralls the mind... great message behind this one... keep writing...

u have mixed the light humor with your sorrow and it makes the poem more appealing...
"anger within strangle my nerve hard
cannot drink much as no money in atm card"