Love

Love

A Poem by mae23

It burns.

Deep into the night,

Alighting candles, torches, and hearts.

It heals.

Fixing the broken,

Picking up smashed, shattered, and torn pieces.

It buzzes.

Vibrating constantly,

Creating sound, feeling, and motion.

It warms.

With passion,

Heating the mind, body, and soul.

It stings.

A sharp prick,

Feeling loss, pain, and fear.

It is it’s own being.

It sways through crowds,

Jumps on trains,

Flies in the wind,

Pulls on doors,

And exclaims when hurt.

We are made of it and we make sure it never dies.

Living on eternally, inside of us.



© 2017 mae23



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Isn't it amazing that "love' can conjure such a variety of feelings, move us to such strong emotions? I think you did a wonderful piece of work in evoking these for us to see.

Take care - Dave

Posted 2 Months Ago


This is truly a beautiful piece! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

Posted 2 Months Ago


I agree dear Mae.
"We are made of it and we make sure it never dies.
Living on eternally, inside of us. "
The above line. True and never forgotten. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 2 Months Ago


mae23

2 Months Ago

Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
I like how you used both the aspects of healing and pain to define love, and I adore how you tied it together with it being something within us that we must keep alive. Beautifully written.

Posted 3 Months Ago


A sweet and dreamy sensation this poem of yours gives us, with emotions as well...
Love indeed, does live inside of us...
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much!
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem :)
You describe love beautifully! I loved it, it's really good and it has truth in it for sure! A beautiful write indeed!

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you!
Anjali

3 Months Ago

You are welcome!
Stunning description of love. The one emotion that can evoke so many other feeling.

Posted 3 Months Ago


mae23

3 Months Ago

Thank you.

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