Towards You.

Towards You.

A Poem by mae23

I felt a pull,

A pull towards you.

So strong and magnetic.

I know you felt it too.  


My palms were sweating

And my face was warm.

You had taken my heart

By thundering storm.


Drawing nearer,

Your darting eyes met mine.

With cautious ease

You let our fingers intertwine.


I dared to come closer

To feel the touch of your skin.

Sparks ran through my body

I felt them deep within.


What could have happened?

Neither of us can know.

For the moment was fleeting

We were forced to let it go.


My nerves were tingling

And still are today.

Because of the “almost”

I should have never let fly away.




© 2017 mae23



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I agree with your words and thoughts.
"My nerves were tingling
And still are today.
Because of the “almost”
I should have never let fly away. "
What we didn't do. Haunt us more than what we did. Thank you Mae for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


mae23

2 Days Ago

Thank you for this incredible review!
Coyote Poetry

2 Days Ago

Was my pleasure dear Mae and you are welcome.
Nice... Kind of mysterious, kind of emotional, it's a mix of these two.. and I really liked it, the way you wrote it is really good and I love the last stanza, that 'almost' part is everything!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I like the "What might have been" theme which is well expressed and relate-able. There is a mystery because you don't tell us why it never happened

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


mae23

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the review!
a112yearoldman

1 Week Ago

Sucks for sure
it really looks like unfinished...

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mae23

2 Weeks Ago

okay what advice would you give me to finish
jazzymars

2 Weeks Ago

the extra stanza was erased already. ;)

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