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I Can See You

I Can See You

A Poem by J. R.
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A poem about paranoia

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I can see you
So clearly see you
I will always see you

Don't try anything
I know where you live
I see you from the window

You can't see a thing
But I can see you
I'm watching you right now

This is the police
You're under arrest
Put your hands behind your head



© 2010 J. R.



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Definitely captures the paranoia. Great write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Had to read the description to understand, but short and sweet. Thumbs up.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this poem. it is short and suit and made me smile. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Liz
I liked this. I think it showed a nice story in a short and simple way. The flow seemed just a bit off to me though. When I read it, it seemed a little choppy. But other than that, really nice work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, short and simple. I have to admit though, I had no idea what it was about until I read the description.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 13, 2010
Last Updated on September 16, 2010
Tags: Orwell, i, can, see, you, big, brother, 1984, paranoia, eyes, everywhere, window, stalker, stalkers, voyeur

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J. R.

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