The Fall

The Fall

A Poem by Brie
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The meaning of this poem is behind the words. I truly believe that the beauty that comes within something new to my experience, will forever outshine my past expectations of beauty. Enjoy, my dear.

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I watched the last bit of dry color bleed from the sky

As an unforgettable Reflection stood before my eye

I look again to see the fading colors and the beauty,

But all I saw was the bleak Reflection of the new me.

Though, a sunset is rather beautiful

And filled with Awe

I prefer the sunrise,

Rather than fall.



© 2017 Brie



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Lift your head high, and raise your self-worth twofold.....this shows you have potential. I can't seem to figure out why a couple of nouns are capitalized, but this is truly thought-provoking in its solemnity with a good musicality to boot. Very well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brie

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much! and just in case you were wondering, I capitalized some of the nouns simply .. read more
emipoemi

2 Months Ago

the "bland" articles take away from that effect, though......
(and you're so very welcome. Al.. read more



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Maybe you can fall into sunrise. Nicely written words in logic and beautiful order. Your composition just make me happy.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lift your head high, and raise your self-worth twofold.....this shows you have potential. I can't seem to figure out why a couple of nouns are capitalized, but this is truly thought-provoking in its solemnity with a good musicality to boot. Very well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brie

2 Months Ago

Thank you so very much! and just in case you were wondering, I capitalized some of the nouns simply .. read more
emipoemi

2 Months Ago

the "bland" articles take away from that effect, though......
(and you're so very welcome. Al.. read more
OKAY DANGGGG way to slay my existence

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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