DIFFERENT

DIFFERENT

A Poem by oursong2

You pick me apart

Like a well written letter

No matter the text

You could maybe do better


Your the voice in my head

Saying be the trend setter 

Write something that's different

Write something that's wetter 


All this feeling and emotion

Pouring down like rain

So I throw it on paper

Hoping there's nothing the same


These thoughts in my mind

Are a broken pane

Not of glass

But from the heart they came


© 2016 oursong2



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Wow. This is amazing a true work of art. My favorite part has to be the last stanza. Just wonderful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Wow! I always read my requests aloud when they're poems, so that way I can feel the emotion a lot more. Very well written, and the emotions I felt reading it were so intense!

Posted 1 Year Ago



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oursong2
oursong2

wildwood, MO



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i am 23 years old punctuation is not my strong suit but words hit me and i can not let them go so i put them down on paper more..

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