Little Star

Little Star

A Poem by Britteny

Where are you little star?

From my mind you've strayed far

Ratta tatta to on my window sill

Without you I'm so ill

Wish I may wish I might

See a glimpse of you tonight

O ratta tatta to goes the rain

Twinkle twinkle it's the same

Where are you little star?

Wish I knew just where you are

Ratta tatta to it's only

Without you I'm so lonely

While my thoughts of you take flight

Please dream of me tonight

But ratta tatta to you never came

Twinkle twinkle it's the same

Where are you little star?

© 2008 Britteny


Author's Note

Britteny
Please ignore my spelling and grammar thanks! This is based off an old do wop song....betcha can't guess it!

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This is so cute! It is fun and playful even though a sense of longing runs through it! Nicely Done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aw this is a really sweet poem i really like the simily of the star ! Keep Writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 20, 2008

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Britteny
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never ending winter and snow....middle of blizzard nowwhere, OH



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My name is Britteny I am 30 years wise and I am finally back on writer's cafe! I have been a member of Writer's Cafe for somewhere around 12 odd years now. I am finally after a long disappearance p.. more..

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