My little humming bird.

My little humming bird.

A Poem by phjasmine
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about loving someone so much you would give yor life for them, even if they didnt love you.

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Given the choice my love, I would die for you,

Because my world is nothing without you,

You are my breath, my heart, my life,

And now as I close my eyes, you walk away,

I open my chest and I try to breathe,

My breath is fading fast, I’m dying,

I picture your face in my mind,

I love you,

With my last ounce of strength, I will try and sing to you,

My little humming bird.


© 2009 phjasmine



Author's Note

phjasmine
the first line sounds william shakespeareish kinda, i think i've heard it before, so yer tell me what you think. ohh and its written from the guys prespective.

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Really nice . If it's from a guy's perspective then I would really like to have a guy like that in future . Lol

Posted 3 Years Ago


Jasmine, is this perspective from a guy named Fernando? Because if it is, I think he subconsciously communicated with your mind and heart to create this wonderful poem. He's the love of my life. And I enjoyed your poem from left to right! Your ideas are sweet stuff; keep going, please.

Posted 4 Years Ago


nice


Posted 4 Years Ago


Story of my life. Well with a particular guy anyways.

Posted 4 Years Ago


this is very well written i love it

Posted 5 Years Ago



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phjasmine
phjasmine

Perth, Australia



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hey, dont really know what to say, i like writting, reading, music and art, i'm always looking to expand my writting abbilitys, i'm working on my spelling and grammer, really i am. I get most my ideas.. more..

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