Just Breathe

Just Breathe

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Just Breathe
And listen carefully
Between the lines
To the pauses
The respirations

Just breathe
Hear clearly
The rapid drum
That pulses quickly
Song of the heart

Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining

Just Breathe
Exhale the negative
Release it to the world
Let it glide to the stars
Explode in the Milky Way.

© 2017 Poetic Beauty



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The simplicity of Your pen allow Your words to reach our hearts easily, sweetly, I feel You are like living in a bubble of Your own and write to/about Yourself from there, a very nice meditation piece, flow slowly to drift You freely in ether.

Thank You sweet beauty for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoy the calm in this piece.
LadyAnn68

4 Months Ago

Please, if you get a chance I just uploaded 3 new poems...take a look?



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this is very relaxing to read yet simple and beautifully written

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems! (my most recent one is called "deep in it" would love to have your feedback on it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I liked the peace of this poem, juxtaposed with undercurrents of passion and negativity. It's like life, where we often experience a number of concurrent emotions and thoughts, some of them at odds with one another. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
"Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining"

I think the above stanza is my favorite. I love how you describe the scent as "ardent"; it sounds so exciting! so thrilling! And I adore the last two lines. It feels like something that is apart of you returns to the universe, to space, to where our basic parts originated.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

Here is the inspiration for this piece and you pick up on the deeper meaning. I had the love of my l.. read more
E.V. Black

4 Months Ago

Across distances, a bond attaches you. It's a lovely poem for something you've experienced. :)
Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

I know he is my soulmate. We keep coming back to each other time and time again. We just aren't toge.. read more
Just lovely full of motivation~

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

Thank you kindly for reading and liking the poem
How many people ever notice that they are breathing. Yet it can reveal so much about our surroundings and emotions.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

This is very true
Great advice, PB.
I can recall so many instances in life where it would have been much better if I'd only stopped to take a breath and relax.
I really enjoyed your refrain prompts at the beginning of and your windups at the end of each verse, giving each more meaning, punch, and a lasting feel.

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for the easy moments shared! ⁓ Richard : )

(check "Breath"/"Breathe" in title)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

Ardent is used for a reason not just to sound pretty lol
Richard

4 Months Ago

Yes, I felt that, too.
I'm unable to be a very surface person … my heart's and soul's emoti.. read more
Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

You are welcome.
Yes, we should pause.. breathe..exhale.... repeat
Feed the brain...release the cluttered heart..

Nice- With a Heart......

JAZZY

Posted 4 Months Ago


Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

Thank you and you are completely correct
J. J.  Nightingale

4 Months Ago

You are welcome Dear Poet.........................
I am absolutely in love with this poem. It is written so beautifully and simply. I feel as if even just reading this poem provides so much calm and relaxation. I adore it!!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

I'm so glad this poem is giving people a feeling of calm. Thank you for your kind words
The simplicity of Your pen allow Your words to reach our hearts easily, sweetly, I feel You are like living in a bubble of Your own and write to/about Yourself from there, a very nice meditation piece, flow slowly to drift You freely in ether.

Thank You sweet beauty for sharing.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoy the calm in this piece.
LadyAnn68

4 Months Ago

Please, if you get a chance I just uploaded 3 new poems...take a look?
I love this. I think I will read this any time I feel am anxiety attack coming on.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melissa Hamilton

4 Months Ago

It helps me too. But sometimes I get to that point when I just can't find the air... I hate those mo.. read more
Poetic Beauty

4 Months Ago

I hope this poem does help. I have times like that as well but I've had years of practice with the m.. read more
Melissa Hamilton

4 Months Ago

Yes I've gotten pretty at controlling my anxiety. But every once in a while I have a bad one that I .. read more

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Poetic Beauty
Poetic Beauty

corn country, IL



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