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Just Breathe

Just Breathe

A Poem by Poetic Beauty

Just Breathe
And listen carefully
Between the lines
To the pauses
The respirations

Just breathe
Hear clearly
The rapid drum
That pulses quickly
Song of the heart

Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining

Just Breathe
Exhale the negative
Release it to the world
Let it glide to the stars
Explode in the Milky Way.

© 2017 Poetic Beauty



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I agree. I meditate daily to find sleep. Breathing is necessary for the meditation. I liked the old wisdom. If upset. Count to ten and take ten deep breathe. Time to gather words and mind. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

I have anxiety so I use breathing to keep me focused and relax my mind to calm myself
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

We need to stop, breathe and re-gather our thoughts and mind.



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I agree. I meditate daily to find sleep. Breathing is necessary for the meditation. I liked the old wisdom. If upset. Count to ten and take ten deep breathe. Time to gather words and mind. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

I have anxiety so I use breathing to keep me focused and relax my mind to calm myself
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

We need to stop, breathe and re-gather our thoughts and mind.
Star Gazer did you see a moon out tonight or was the skies just to overcast and your great view did not last but by morning sun and the new day you had won The Good Lord looked down upon you and smiled upon you and said Oh Glorious days ahead.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is very relaxing to read yet simple and beautifully written

I'm new on here, so it would be an honour if you could review my poems! (my most recent one is called "deep in it" would love to have your feedback on it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

7 Months Ago

Many times my poems are simple. It all depends on my mood.
I liked the peace of this poem, juxtaposed with undercurrents of passion and negativity. It's like life, where we often experience a number of concurrent emotions and thoughts, some of them at odds with one another. A very enjoyable read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much.
"Just Breathe
Inhale the experience
The ardent scent
Of a time long past
But still remaining"

I think the above stanza is my favorite. I love how you describe the scent as "ardent"; it sounds so exciting! so thrilling! And I adore the last two lines. It feels like something that is apart of you returns to the universe, to space, to where our basic parts originated.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Here is the inspiration for this piece and you pick up on the deeper meaning. I had the love of my l.. read more
E.V. Black

1 Year Ago

Across distances, a bond attaches you. It's a lovely poem for something you've experienced. :)
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

I know he is my soulmate. We keep coming back to each other time and time again. We just aren't toge.. read more
Just lovely full of motivation~

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you kindly for reading and liking the poem
How many people ever notice that they are breathing. Yet it can reveal so much about our surroundings and emotions.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

This is very true
Great advice, PB.
I can recall so many instances in life where it would have been much better if I'd only stopped to take a breath and relax.
I really enjoyed your refrain prompts at the beginning of and your windups at the end of each verse, giving each more meaning, punch, and a lasting feel.

Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for the easy moments shared! ⁓ Richard : )

(check "Breath"/"Breathe" in title)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Ardent is used for a reason not just to sound pretty lol
Richard

1 Year Ago

Yes, I felt that, too.
I'm unable to be a very surface person … my heart's and soul's emoti.. read more
Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Yes, we should pause.. breathe..exhale.... repeat
Feed the brain...release the cluttered heart..

Nice- With a Heart......

JAZZY

Posted 1 Year Ago


Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

Thank you and you are completely correct
J. J.  Nightingale

1 Year Ago

You are welcome Dear Poet.........................
I am absolutely in love with this poem. It is written so beautifully and simply. I feel as if even just reading this poem provides so much calm and relaxation. I adore it!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

1 Year Ago

I'm so glad this poem is giving people a feeling of calm. Thank you for your kind words

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