Shadow killer

A poem about a rapist and murderer Plz Review!

There's a shadow killer in our midst

 

He tears apart their innocence

And smiles and chuckles in deranged bliss

His eyes of charcole with sweat on upper lip

 

He's coming and you don't know to run

 

He'll kill you and destroy you

That shadow killer

He'll send you into feathered arms and bliss

 

Wait

You need only wait

 

At the silver gates

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[stephen dillon]

very well written

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

thank you :-)

[shultzfeather]

is it the devil? Silver gates of hell? A dark angel? Life? Experience? Sends one to feathered arms bliss. A bad boyfriend you expect to turn angel? See you later, you teazer. Entrance to angel school? come on

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

its up for personal interpretation lol :-P though my interpretation is of a murderer sending ppl to the silver gates of heaven

[shultzfeather]

thank you, thank you, i would have lost sleep, still may, powerful imagery

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol thanx thats what I go for in all my poems!

[shultzfeather]

damn, right on

[stephen dillon]

same here spotinaiety?

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

All the way

[shultzfeather]

stunner to me. wish you would expand thought with more to it

[Emily Dickinson Jr.]

lol but then I wont be able to keep my dear readers wanting more ;-)