HOPE

HOPE

A Poem by Prateeksha Khot
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HOPE is a short poem which tells us to never lose faith whatsoever because god always has something planned for us.

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When dreams are shattered,

When you feel all is lost,

Don't feel dejected,

Don't lose hope at any cost.


Life is not a bed of roses,

It has its ups and downs.

We should learn to accept failures,

And not meet them with frowns.


So what if you have not achieved,

What was to be your aim.

There is no need to feel sorry,

There is no need to feel shame.


Man writes his own destiny,

So don't lose hope as yet.

Come on! Buckle up and work harder,

Dont sit there and fret.


If things don't turn out the way you want,

Don't let that spoil your mood,

Because you must remember one thing :

WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS FOR YOUR GOOD!


© 2010 Prateeksha Khot



Author's Note

Prateeksha Khot
do you agree with this view? How many of you have actually come across such a situation?


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I agree with you completely! The cliche that I've always heard and sadly used myself was "life will never be easy," it speaks for itself. Now on the structure of it, you had a great rhyme scheme of ABCB and then in the last stanza I understand that the content of it was still very poetic and expressive of your emotions. It seems that you knew just what you wanted to say in that last stanza and were excited to write it down; if so, I would advise to write down what first comes to mind and then later go back and try to keep it with the same rhyme scheme. Otherwise, it was a very convincing poem and I really enjoyed reading this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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very nice work! i enjoyed it, simple but it came with a punch. Never a failure, always a lesson.:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


that is a very good poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Inspiring. It is such a happy poem!
Love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully portrayed........elegant and true :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. Everything "bad" that happens makes you stronger, so yes,whatever happens, happens for your own good. If something "bad" happens, you shouldn't loose hope.
Great poem
:D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great lines..jus hookd me at first...u used quotes very well according to your poetry....


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hope is good to read. Well written poem. With regards.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A really nice poem about hope. it is very true what you wrote in the poem I would like to read more of your work. Nice piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At last ! A poem to cheer you up and not full up of doom and gloom. Simply a nice
traditional piece of writing to improve your day. It needs ( perhaps) a bit of work,
some of the scanning is a bit dodgy.Like it ! Good work !

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a beautiful poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on April 18, 2010
Tags: hope, dreams, lost, dejected, life, roses, failure, aim, sorry, shame, destiny, mood, good, remember

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Prateeksha Khot
Prateeksha Khot

Mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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