Forgiveness

Forgiveness

A Poem by jeannear
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just a little something I came up with for those people who experience a bump in a relationship or any situation...

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In life you may do things that
you never wished you done
In life there are obstacles that
you must overcome
In life you make mistakes and
learn for the better, and in life
GOD points you to the path you
must enter....
In life you meet that person that's
suppose to be in it
In life you may hurt someone
that you never intended
In life you try hard to make all bad   
things good, and in life one of those
bad things may come off as misunderstood 
In life you say "I'm sorry" if you
did something wrong
In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong
In life that one you meet may
make you feel whole
And That One That Your Talking
About May Be Reading This Poem.......                          


© 2014 jeannear



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Great wisdom in your poetry. Life is fair. If we lead with love and kindness. Tried to do the right things. We will be okay.
"In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong "
I agree with the above lines. If we don't forgive. We will limit what we can do and see. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

3 Years Ago

very true coyote thank you for that kind comment



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Great wisdom in your poetry. Life is fair. If we lead with love and kindness. Tried to do the right things. We will be okay.
"In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong "
I agree with the above lines. If we don't forgive. We will limit what we can do and see. No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

3 Years Ago

very true coyote thank you for that kind comment
In life you should forgive so the
damage won't prolong
Well said, very true to the core, great writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

3 Years Ago

Exactly!....we all make mistakes in life and if it was a true mistake you learn from it
Linda alexander

3 Years Ago

Take care, keep writing
Makes me ponder on those people I've wronged and who have wronged me..

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this a lot, and its true we must forgive. Its really good.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

3 Years Ago

thank you and yes we do :)
closed

3 Years Ago

Do you think you can check out mine?
jeannear

3 Years Ago

I cant your profile says closed
so much heart in this, there's no choice BUT to love it. The phrasing is beautiful, it just rolls right off of the tongue. Really enjoying your stuff!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

4 Years Ago

thank you Tyson I appreciate that:)
I absolutely love this poem; it is such a moving piece of writing. The ending is very clever. Your poetry is prolific and inspiring.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

4 Years Ago

thank you so much I love this comment I appreciate it very much...:)
Calissa Knox

4 Years Ago

You're welcome, Jeannear! :)
On line 11 you say "heart". Did you mean "heart" or "hurt"? It's a beautiful piece, besides that confusion, and I'm eager to read some of your other works.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

4 Years Ago

thank you for noticing that error I didn't see it at first...I appreciate your comment
I love this ! Absolutely brilliant!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
I enjoyed this very much. :) Your repetition was charming, as was your rhyme scheme. My only suggestions is to possibly look at working on your structure. Anyways, thank you so much for sharing this! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

jeannear

4 Years Ago

thank you very much and I appreciate your comment and criticism and will work on that...:)
Jared Michael Smith

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome. :)

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I'm 25 years old I love to write stories and poetry...this is my first time posting writings on a website so it's is a little new for me but I'm getting use to it...I love reading poetry as well and i.. more..

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