I'm Ready

I'm Ready

A Poem by Jeannear
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This is just a small and simple poem for all the lover's out there :)

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I use to think I wouldn't find that one

the one that would make my life complete, but

 ever since you came along my thoughts 

have changed to hope instead of defeat


You make me feel whole again, when before

I was incomplete

For this I want to say thank you, and offer my heart

as yours to keep


Together we have a passion for each other that is special

and truly deep


I'm ready when you are to make this love last and

complete

© 2015 Jeannear


Author's Note

Jeannear
P.s sorry to all my writing friends on here....I haven't been on here in a while and I promise I will be posting more :)

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Such an emotional well written write, I really like this

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

3 Years Ago

Thank you Brandie I appreciate the comment and you stopping by
Jade

3 Years Ago

not a problem
Your short and simple poem says it beautifully, the way love should be.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much i appreciate that comment: )
The wholeness of someone is an awesome feeling:) I enjoyed:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

6 Years Ago

Thank you i appreciate that :)
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6 Years Ago

Your very welcome:)
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Sai
This piece made me so happy. Beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

7 Years Ago

appreciate you love :)
sharing intimate thoughts is offering to be vulnerable - and THAT is seldom easy. Nice seeing you here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Jeannear

7 Years Ago

thank you I appreciate you and your comment
a beautiful love letter,enjoyed the read

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

7 Years Ago

thank you so much
 wordman

7 Years Ago

you`re welcome
I enjoyed the journey in the poetry.
"I'm ready when you are to make this love last and
complete"
When love truly come. Best days of a life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote




Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

7 Years Ago

thank you so much....I didn't think this poem was good enough to post at first
Coyote Poetry

7 Years Ago

You are welcome.
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MJ
I like how you made it rhyme really well and also it's a very cute ooem. Awesome job! Also, if its not too much to ask if really appreciate it if you could take a look at my writing piece on my profile. Thanks, and keep writing :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jeannear

7 Years Ago

thank you I appreciate your comment, and yes i'm more then happy to review your writing :)

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