A Broken Heart

When he’s away

I begin to fade

I feel myself dying

I start crying

I can feel my heart

Falling apart

I try to put it back together

But it won’t stay like that forever

It starts to get dark

Is this a broken heart?

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

My friend Matthew seems to like your work just as much as I. (: Lol. Anyways, I too love this rhyme scheme. Wonderful write.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Alex,

A broken heart....or obsession....sometimes they are exactly the same. I like the rhyme scheme...since I use it alot. I do hope he is worth such torment.

Regards,

Matthew