I did it again

I did it again

A Story by Rache David
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"Stupid to believe"

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He said "I love you" but he left me.
I was stupid to believe it, and more stupid to hope again when he said, "Wait for me. I'll be back someday."

© 2014 Rache David


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Well, women can be such love-fools. Absolute nutters in our heads, more so in our hearts. Pithy and exacting, your writing drives the point home.

Best,
M.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I agree with A.Amos, it's got the entire story in it. I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I truly enjoyed your two liner, as its have a whole story in it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a two-line story of betrayal and hope.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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5 Years Ago

Two lines that speaks a huge isn't just two lines but a great read! Such stupidity of hearts are nor.. read more
Rache David

5 Years Ago

Yeah that’s right. Some might say it’s wrong but you cannot stop your heart from loving that som.. read more
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5 Years Ago

Agreed! That's heart's right somehow.... :)

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Added on May 6, 2014
Last Updated on May 6, 2014
Tags: stupid, love, back

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Rache David
Rache David

NCR, Philippines



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I'm a psychology graduate. I'm 20 years old. I love reading English novels and love to listen to classical musics. I love exploring things. Because I believe there's something more astounding and eth.. more..

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