Harsh Agliophobia

Poem based on the fear of pain.

O! Lord the Almighty!

You keep your eye

Upon me

In each and every stage

of my painful life.

What can I do My Lord?

A sufferer of Agliophobia,

A Fear of pain;

that wanders over me

and on my love.

The Pain is too painful

Unbearable it is,

Like an Innocent bairn

I weep

due to a thought of Pain.

In your comfort,

My Lord, the Almighty

What Agliophobia, What other

You are My savior, my lord

Comforter of Agliophobia.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar problems.
A little weird.

Reviews

[barleygirl]

As a person who has lived with intense all-over pain CONSTANTLY thru-out my life, I have a hard time relating to anyone who’s afraid of pain. Thanks for teaching me a new word, tho (title word) *smile* I feel your somewhat-rambling poem is a little too lighthearted to convey the true sense of how someone might honestly be so afraid of pain, he/she will not try doing things that involve risk. Your poem is one-dimensional – and it’s a good message, that God is the one to relieve us of our silly fears. But I don’t feel you made this a multi-dimensional message to show the different depths of how it can be, when a person has some irrational fear that’s life-altering. Still, sometimes we want to write a lighthearted message as we play with some new word & that’s the way this feels (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot dear! (((HUGS)))

[Pooja]

God saves us all from such pains. Sad for you!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Kleptomaniac]

I wonder how one can bear such a pain. Feeling sympathetic for you.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Crazy Robot]

It's just went over my head...er..but still feels it a nice one...er..

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[Lara Crimson]

I like the description you gave of Agliophobia which was an unfamiliar subject for me and your work verily stands over it. Thank you!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you!

[Breadwinner]

Fear of pain- Agliophobia is a new term before me and cleared it very well by your description and words...thanks for such a knowledge... A good poem indeed.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you.

[PoeticBlindness]

It is a rare subject, indeed a tough subject, to compose a poetry upon but you did it. I like the trust you have on God. Worth reading.

[Raj Sahu]

Thanks a lot!

[Geodan]

Pain is sometimes an unbearable thing. But the assurance of unconditional love can help. Your poem is beautiful and really pulls on the heart. Keep it up!

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you so much.

[Zephyr]

'I weep
due to a thought of Pain"
Interesting lines........
I have never come across Agliophobia until reading your poem......
I like how you broach upon the topic for your poems and this poem is altogether different and really unique.
The detailed description you gave is also great as this is a rare subject.
Great work.:)

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you for your appreciation. Thank you very much. 😊😊

[Zephyr]

My pleasure........

[Priyanshi]

Aglophobia, ah, a topic none could think to write over it, but you did it and that very well... I shall really appreciate your work... beautiful poem, Raj.

[Raj Sahu]

Thank you very much dear Priyanshi.😊😊

[Priyanshi]

Pleasure is mine.