O mine beloved mother!

O mine beloved mother!

A Poem by Raj Sahu
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An eulogy for my teacher who is my mother!

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O mine beloved mother! thee canst not ever wend far,
Far to the remotest lodging from my heart,
But if 't be true thee doth, my heart's door is ajar,
Peeping thy sweet memories, gratitude for thy part.

Thou hast loved, cared and adored me,
In the picture of the children, thou hast begotten.
So tender is thy love, so deep I see
In the mouth of doom, which canst not be forgotten.



I joyously sing the praise of thy generous conduct
No such mortal on this earth hast I ever hath met
Angels tooketh era to buildeth such a kind product
Sending thee amongst mortals made their eyes wet.

Thou art the guiding god-mother I believeth,
Day by day, thou brightens my darkened path.
Day by day, my all the sorrows taketh
Thy mellow-mouthed words for a replenish bath.



Eternal beauty liveth in thy eyes,
Ne'er ending affection flows from them.
And thou art my loveliest prize
And I am thy most precious gem.

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I pray I pray to the ultimate master of all,
To place his divine hand on that lady soul.
I beseech the creator of great and small,
To strengthen that lady to fulfil her role.

© 2019 Raj Sahu


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I admire you for tackling a long poem using intricate form for rhyme & dialect. Your poem is well-crafted with an "old time" sound . . . something popular to imitate . . . and difficult to get right. I must say that your Shakespearean sound is not always easy to follow & glide across while reading (a little clunky). But we don't get good at new styles if we don't try & this is a great effort for you. I have a bias against elevated language that you use here (your message is strong & well-developed, it's just the sound I don't like much) . . . this stilted language doesn't convey the warmth & affection like writing in a more conversational way (just my opinion!) (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much!



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The artwork was beautiful and the words, sincere and wonderful. You allowed the reader to feel the emotions and the appreciation. Old wisdom, the word "mother", mean kindness and love. Thank you my friend for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

You are welcome my friend.
The amount of respect, heart and compassion conveyed in this poem is unlike anything I've seen before. Your truly digging deep into the kind of person that you are and how you care for a loved one. That's amazing and even brings a tear to the eye because I can resonate with it. Keep up the good work!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much!
Love the clever rhyme scheme and the flow of the words. Beautifully written.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
Loving the rhyme scheme of the poetry, as well as the sophisticated writing style depicted by the language/word choice. What a beautiful and thoughtful poem, well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
I remembered a story I heard from my mother: once, a child was talking with God in Heaven. One day, He decided to send him to earth, so that he could be born. The child was scared, but God reassured him he would be alright, saying: ”I will give you an angel who would protect and love you.” ”What will be the name of the angel?”, the child asked. ”You will call the angel MOTHER.”
Great job summarizing the preciousness of a mother!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

A beautiful anecdote!
Thank you!
LylaCrystal

1 Month Ago

Your welcome!
What an amazing poem you had written... Piece of work.
I'm honestly saying this was great
Keep working on these types of work


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much!
Such a rich and beautiful dedication. Such a fantastic poem. Thank You!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
Fine job that echoes, for me, 19th poets, written in a standard verse form. Good work, rhymed poetry is,
for me difficult, so I admire those who have a go.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much!
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Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thank you!
My heart always swells with happiness to know that someone has had such love in his life. I wasn't so fortunate, but I have always wished it for others. I agree with Barleygirl about the clunkiness of the language, but the message is as beautiful as a tear in a joyous eye. It's touching to see a son who loves his mother so much. You are blessed beyond words.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raj Sahu

4 Months Ago

Thanks a lot!

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Raj Sahu
Raj Sahu

Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India



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Myself Raj Sahu from the historic town of Burhanpur, Madhya Pradesh, India. I had completed my high schooling with flying colours from Choithram School, Indore in Humanities stream and was first in or.. more..

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