Needing Him

salvation process.

Waiting, waiting, waiting...
In the dark.
Solitary. swimming in shadows.
I can't do it, and I can't understand,
Why is your absense so heavy?
I am me. Myself.
And I can't do this.
I ready for your presence.
Shine on me now.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Snug Bug]

Very nice. It is similar to a poem I posted but yours uses a short length to get the message across. Great job!

[Calypso]

Well written. We always try to fight for ourselves, but in the end Jesus is the one who helps.

[♪GetUse2MyMelodie..]

If you ever surfed writerscafe then you would notice the long lengths of everything. Now this is different because it s shorter but still I pretty much liked it.=)

[Ethan Paz]

What genre is this? I want to understand what you are meaning in this but I know you are dependent. Good write.

[A Lone Creative Nomad]

FOUND YOU!