Wild Flowers

Wild Flowers

A Poem by Country Girl
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I love Arkansas. It is soo pretty in the spring!

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Beautiful wild flowers.

Wonderful to see.

Laying in the field of them.

Wondering if they admire me?

They are so lovley.

I will not pick them.

I will let them be.

My pretty llittle wild flowers.

They are wonderful to me!

 


© 2008 Country Girl



Author's Note

Country Girl
There are a ton of wild flower in Arkansas! They are so pretty!

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This is an adorable little poem! the line "Wondering if they admire me?" struck me deepest. Such an innocent thought, yet creative. It made me smile!
Great job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


That is cute. I love the admiring me part. It reminds me of Alice and Wonderland, where Alice is listing to the flowers sing to her. Wonderful poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

My suggestion: The line reads 'Wondering if they admiring me?' I would suggest that you either ditch the question mark or change the tense of 'wonder', but that's just me. ^_^ Adorably innocent poem, love. Keep up the good work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I enjoy the happiness in this work of yours. If I may suggest a subtle change:

"Wondering if they admire me ..."

rather than the "?"

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very pretty. I really like the rhyme in this poem. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i enjoyed the rythem and the beat; that the poem gave

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very cheerful, innocent and uplifting. Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice, makes me feel happy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like that one too. thanks for the uplift. rii

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Country Girl
Country Girl

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