All that remains

short ramblings and such

Everyday is the same 
filled with heartache and blame 
we contain.. 
but our shame, just a game 
~so much harder to tame~ 
Like a monster it claims 
all the life in my veins, 
and I'm chained to the anguish and pain 
that remains. 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Short and full of rhyme. Valentine

[Antoñyo]

Nice piece; short'n sweet, real & raw...powerfully effective

Thanks for sharing

[revalatia]

:) thanx for reading it

[fireblossom]

Nice rap nice writer.

[Sacha Davison]

This is actually really good. You use such interesting structuring in your poetry. I enjoy reading your work!

[revalatia]

thanx very much! I love to write, but somehow I find it hard to break that structure.. so I do what comes natural.

[Sacha Davison]

What comes natural is always better than what has been forced.