Cage of the Wytch

Cage of the Wytch

A Poem by revenant21
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Kind of random, I think. haha. Hope you enjoy it.

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I dance between

The Wytches grasp

In waves of forlorn wonder.

Banestones glitter sinister

Beneath the wicked stars

Incantations fall

From subtle lustuous lips

Rpatured phrases to Wicca.

Electric pulses

Through the clouds

Twirl betwixt the firelight.

Fallen commets

Caper to the Goddess.

Flames come forth

From faithful pagan whispers

Breaking through the souls.

Howling through the cosmic glare

They whistle to the night.

Blasphemous imps

Swim through the KA of many.

When met with souls

The starlight falters

Like sparks on

Tongues scorched my magick

As I dance between the

Wytches grasp.

© 2010 revenant21


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I like it, its so very appropriate for Halloween. One thing, line 8 "raptured" but nothing too serious. I like the mood you set up and the mix between modern and older concepts of what witches are. A lot of people just go along with the happy go lucky modern neo-pagan idea of the witch, but the colorful history that reaches back for ages is much, much richer than anything people can come up with nowadays. Reminds me of the Gehenna song, "A Witch is Born" which is a great song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like it, its so very appropriate for Halloween. One thing, line 8 "raptured" but nothing too serious. I like the mood you set up and the mix between modern and older concepts of what witches are. A lot of people just go along with the happy go lucky modern neo-pagan idea of the witch, but the colorful history that reaches back for ages is much, much richer than anything people can come up with nowadays. Reminds me of the Gehenna song, "A Witch is Born" which is a great song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good write. I thought it was a really good write. Good job. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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