Call Down the Moon

Call Down the Moon

A Poem by Rie Sheridan Rose

 

Call down the moon

and we'll ride the wind

to find the fields where

the dragons lie.

The rainbow's end is

bathed in stardust

and the pixies dance

to the nightingale's song.

The Milky Way

becomes our river

as our ship explores

the sapphire sky.

It's fueled by dreams...

and the magic of a smile.


© 2015 Rie Sheridan Rose



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beautiful and vivid imagery in this fantasy write! enjoyed the flow of words and the ending is perfect!
you might consider to edit the typo 'nightengale'.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rie Sheridan Rose

2 Years Ago

Thanks! Fixed now.
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r welcome! :)
I really love it how you use expensive words!

Posted 3 Years Ago


So very beautiful and ever so wonderful.
I just love a wonderful fantasy write!
This is amazing, Very well written.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Your magical poem just took me to a journey of great fantasy.....
Thanks for sharing....
I love you works...
-Cuppie

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

You really havea great talent. Great poem.

Author; Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 8 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

look at that moon, inspirational, methinks i will write about the moon, its beautiful, gosh, moons are so non tangable, :S :) xx ,mishy

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Idid ... but the moon stayed where it was...why? just because...

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem was nice to read. Very creative with the dragons, and pixies and such. Thanks for sharing!
-Bryce

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Lovely imagery in a rhythmic flow. It is full of fantasy, the sort of stuff dreams themselves are made of. Bravo! Margaret

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very nice--I like it. It's well-crafted, image-laden and imaginative. Very good, Rie.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 19, 2008
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Rie Sheridan Rose
Rie Sheridan Rose

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I'm a Texas girl, born and bred. I have a bachelor's degree in Technical Theater, and another in Asian Studies. Learning is one of my favorite hobbies. :) I am the eldest of four sisters, and that was.. more..

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