SUNSET

SUNSET

A Poem by Marie
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And yet another sunset poem...

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Crimson fades to rose,

Silver dulls to gray,

Purple shadows spread

Through the gold of day.

 

Scarlet flames are embers,

Embers turn to sparks;

Brightness shines a moment,

Then gives way to dark.


© 2015 Marie



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That's a beautiful photo. Did you take?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Thank you. I did not take the photo, but found it on the Internet.
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I like the read. Those below two lines are awesome.

Brightness shines a moment,
Then gives way to dark.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Dusk, a magical time of day!

Posted 2 Years Ago


great imagery!
you can see it even without the picture.
short and lovely poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Thank you. Frankly I thought the picture was bettter than the poem.
Colorful, descriptive words to complement a spectacular picture. You captured it, Marie.

This was great enjoyed.

My best regards,

Rick

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
For me dawn and sunsets are the festivals of nature.

A very nice write. Provoked me to go outside and enjoy it(if it could be seen, lol).

Nice play with colors, the picture provides icing on the cake.

Thanks for sharing.

Devanshu

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Marie

2 Years Ago

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed the sunset.
You take my breath away.....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Thank you.
yes your famous gorgeous sunsets, Marie. each one's more beautiful than the last. your play with colours is amazing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Marie

2 Years Ago

Thanks. I'll bet I've written enough poetry about sunsets for a book...
Short, but very beautiful!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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San Antonio, TX



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