A half step

A half step

A Poem by Ruby Moon
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This just suddenly popped into mind seeing the title "A step half made" by Jeff Bresee

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A step half made

Is like a step half done

A step that is but half a step

…away from completion but yet

Still half a step more than a step that is none


© 2011 Ruby Moon



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this is... cant explain that, just great..
like this poem :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


That's really good :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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hahaha...lol..very clever ...great!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Confusing and true. I lost count of my steps a long time ago. xD 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


Steps are usually not counted on a journey it takes on how long you can do something that will help you reach up...
We are all taking a path step by step... eventhough it pains the feet
Good Job
100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


It's amazing how simply short this is yet be so addicting to read. You have in your hands a very good talent, my dear. :D

The way this short stanza is written has a big mind opener for something so short.

Well done :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Original and precise and evokes many powerful possibilities. I like the use of the 'step half done' as a metaphor for moving towards completion and yet conveying a sense of hesitancy.

Posted 6 Years Ago


That was a unique piece of writing. Consice, yet saying so many things. Very optimistic from my point of view. Loved it! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Thoughtful. I like the length, it just says exactly what it needs to

Posted 6 Years Ago



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