"Again And Again"

Hello!

I have been waiting for you,

Just to see your face again.

 

I still remember your first hello!

And your last good bye.

Well I shouldn’t have flown that high.

 

I know! I know, It ain’t love!

It was just your ego and your lie,

But I promise I won’t deny.

 

 My fingertips slipping down your hair,

And each of your breath holding my breath!

“Those eyes” and I don’t care whether the moment was right

Oh! Those lies.

 

When you passed, even my footprints lied;

Silly guy, why do you miss those memories

And those lies.

 

Never out with your thought

Isn’t that something called “Love”,

Or was that foolishness and your lie.

 

Still miss the freckles on your cheeks,

And the first taste of your lips.

Something that I can’t deny.

 

When you walked out your way

My heart screamed ‘don’t go away’!

Trembling with pain yet wanted you to stay.

 

Salty and wet was my eyes,

Yet sweeter was the memories of lies.

I promise! I won’t cry.

 

Hey you! Go! just leave me alone.

I know you’ve got a heart of stone,

Frozen and real cold.

 

No, I don’t want to see you,

Cause you make me fall again.

Yet, A man is made to make mistakes again and again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Cadel]

Your writing wonderfully outlines the confusing contradictions between our rationality and our feelings/desires.

[BlackPrince]

I love the rhythm and the straightforward message.

WELL DONE

[sabinn]

thank you very much

[pia]

this was well worded. it was nice poem to read about a man falling in love and regretting it as he feels cheated emotionally by someone who doesnt seem equally passionate. wonderful stuff
critique; second stanza, last line, its 'flown' not 'flew'
keep writing, you are amazing

[sabinn]

thank you pia for your review and for your help to find out the mistake ... heartly thank you :)