He weeps

He watches us
He knows every thought we have
Every feeling we feel
He sees every tear we shed

He hears every cry for help
He hears every scream for mercy
He hears every plea
He knows our pain

He stands behind us in all we do
He sees the murderer run from their victims
He sees the rapist walk off with a smirk
And he weeps with sorrow

He watches the teen run from home
He watches the husband abuse his wife
He sees the lonely girl in the corner
And he weeps

He sees men laugh at his offer of love
He watches people deny his protection
He watches humans kill his creation
And he weeps

He weeps for the lost and longs to bring them home
He weeps for the broken hearted and wished to mend their hearts
He weeps for the stubborn who turn away from his love
He weeps for the world he created

We are his children
And we weeps
Because he has the ultimate
Broken heart  

Author's Note

Just tell me what u think and look at the picture it's what inspired this

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

some will only read the words written, some will glimpse beyond the words written and have an inkling of your view, some sill embrace the concepts back of your words and grasp your whole idea and even go beyond in creating as if it were there own...

I find this piece the best you have ever written because the continuity is complete and seamless. If I had to grade for creativity i would not say it is the best, but if i had to grade for the technical accuracy of it as a write, and the balance of the piece I would grade it high

[M Garcia]

A broken stinks and is so fun. This is a wonderfully written poem. Thanks for sharing.

[PoetryofProvidence]

damn , you think alot........

[MuSe Ampoule]

He weeps at the ignorance of man, too obtuse to appreciate what they have. Well constructed with lots of anaphoral sentences.

[Cynthia]

What a nice write and a good read!!!!
Amazing!

[KAREN]

Another good read! I love how you expressed God's feelongs in this poem!

[Calypso]

Your poems about God is always amazing. It's true, he always watches. I love God and I will always trust him because I know he loves me and wants what's best for me.

[Coyote Poetry]

I believe God is very disappointed in the ways of man. Allow hate and violence to take over a world. I believe it may take one by one people to show kindness and show the world. Reaching down to help someone should be the way of the world. Not guns and fear. A powerful poem. Thank you. You wrote a amazing poem.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is amazing! this made me cry.... so true!

[Sweets]

that was good :)
Great poem!
=3

[Misty Blue Eyes]

WOW this is powerful. i love the pic, it goes with the poem even more. This is one of my favs from you hun great great job. keep at it