Beths hope

Beths hope

A Chapter by sarah

Chapter 1, Only the Start

 

      As I get out of the car, and walk though the rain, I think of all that happened here. I stepped into the shop that holds my past in its broken glass. Only one clock stands unbroken. The shop belonged to a man named James Becker. His father had run the shop, as had his grandfather before him. It is still here; no different than the last time I had seen it. My name is Beth Schmit, my mother named be after her American friend who had come to help her while she was pregnant with me.  I am back in Germany for the first time since I was 20 years old.  I am a World War II survivor.  I am back and it is time for me to let go of my pain and anger.

     I remember being 11 years old at the time and lived with my mother and father.  I am an only child.  My mother made bread for our town; there were only about 400 people that lived there. My father was in the army; he said it was “his calling”. We lived in a big red brick house it had been in my fathers’ family for many generations.  We rented out the top part of our home to my friend’s family.  My parents had been friends with them since

 

childhood.  They had three kids, Anne, Paul & Andrew. They were my friends too, and even now I think of them.  I will never forget them. 

However, my real reason for being here was my special friend Mr. Becker.  He is the one that really tried to make a difference, he gave his life trying. I saw him die. I can never forget. But wait, I’m getting too far ahead of myself.

     Every day after school I would go to Mr. Becker’s shop. He would teach me how to wind and polish the clocks. He was my second father, although at that time no one could take the place of my real father, in my heart or in my life.  My Father and I were best friends. Every evening we would sit around and talk about our day.  He would tell me how his day went, and I would tell him of how I did that day at school.   I loved my father more than the whole world itself.   Whenever I had a problem he would always put away what he was doing and listen to what I had on my mind.  He was everything to me.

 



© 2011 sarah


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Hey! Congratulations on winning my contest as My Absolute Favourite!
I really love this story and it just stood out from the very beginning that it was going to be my favourite.

I was really moved by this chapter and those following and I just wanted to review it myself :)
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Interesting story. I think I started this and then my internet what caplooey. Will keep reading.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey! Congratulations on winning my contest as My Absolute Favourite!
I really love this story and it just stood out from the very beginning that it was going to be my favourite.

I was really moved by this chapter and those following and I just wanted to review it myself :)
Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I wonder what happens next.

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This is well written, very intresting!

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More!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Off to a great start!

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This was a really fantastic first chapter. I was instantly interested in your story, and could relate to the main character on multiple levels. I liked the fact that although you disclosed particular information, you still maintained a sense of intrigue and mystery, which further enhanced my wanting to read more! A lovely start,
~PaperHearts

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Wow this was good and detailed.

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A very strong beginning. You gave enough description to make the story interesting. I like the history of the character. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

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Wow! What a great chapter 1!
It fully tells the background info of the main character, Beth.
'Father and I were best friend'! what a warm family she have, at least between her dad and herself.
Great write!
I am moving on to the next chapter now!

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