Aware

Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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I'm trying to correct the points to 100 - hope this works.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Many and many thank yous...:).....
Confuser

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. Just brilliant writing. Love it.
Brilliant! In my library. If I were to quote, it would be every line, what a marvel. What a wonderful writer you are. Thank you so much Sami. Just simply beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Confuser

2 Years Ago

Sorry, don't know how to correct, the 10 points - should be 100 - ad, google is interfering with re.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. What a marvelous review from a marvelous poet and friend. Just the visit is rnough. For I don't.. read more
This is my kind of poetry Sami.. just gorgeous my friend..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Stella for this wonderful review and kind visit. All appreciated...:).......... read more
Long before time itself began you were her lover Sami. Her being womankind. Beautiful writing no chara

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true andwell articulated. Glad you like this romantic write. Take care...:)....
dear Sami... "long before the winnowing of the wind"
is a lovely caress of poetry. Your poem and the art
Is delicious like berries and ice cream. So romantic
and to be savored. truly... Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So glad you could enjoy and taste this treat. I'm honored when you visit. Be blessed...:)........ read more
Master of poets. Awesome love poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You humble me by your lovely review and appreciation. You are too in your own right. Be blessed.. read more
Day Dreamer

3 Years Ago

:-) the pleasure is all mine.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)...................
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Pax
you painted love as if merely breathing...
a love that keeps on blooming,
a muse who's always there, loving, caring for both hearts...
beautiful piece, my brother :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. You have graced me with your lovely visit and famed intellect. Th.. read more
I always enjoy other's views on romance and love in general as we all paint different pictures with our words. Wonderful to see what you have done here, so please, keep it up.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. Muchas Gracias...:)........ read more
Yes This seems a nice poem in all its form and style. It is different piece and written in a worthy style...

Posted 3 Years Ago


M.A.Rathore

3 Years Ago

As for as my real comment is concerned I have go again for detailed description and some edit with t.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

No sir, but thanks. I appreciate it though. Not concerned when my work is done for it is the origina.. read more
M.A.Rathore

3 Years Ago

Yes yes It's ok...good keep it up...
"Long before the star's dim flicker." I love this line. You're imagery here is sensual and enticing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much dear poet for this amazing review and kind words. All appreciated...:)......... read more
MomzillaNC

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome. I'm in a delicate romance kind of mood after finishing "The Dance Plays On…" .. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)......................

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Added on July 20, 2014
Last Updated on December 1, 2014

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