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Aware

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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A romance poem...A sort of a love letter...

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Aware/……………………By Sami Khalil

A romance poem…

The Poem:


Dancing with vim and vigor,

Long before stars' dim flicker

And the leaves that wither...

Long before the winnowing

Of the wind across soul-scented

Barns and old plowed fields…

Long before our silent questions

Became aware of potentiality

And their scattered companions (answers)…

Conversely, it was “just us”,

Painted in the sheen's of love prompt,

With poignant looks at life and laughter.

Long before roots remember

soil’s drifted fragrances,

Or the five senses of the truest form,

Away from all common places.

Long before wishful thinking,

Merit and demerit,

Even instruments knowing their plectrums;

I read your eyes! I fathomed the silence we spoke constantly!

I loved you! 














© 2014 Sami Khalil



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Wow I really like this piece. The lingo is simply divine and so are the pieces of artwork shown here to spice up the poem and give a sort of imagery. I must say that this is an amazing work of art here.
I especially loved the lines that say," Dancing with vim and vigor, Long before stars' dim flicker, And leaves that wither.
Job well done my friend. Keep up the good work and may you continue to be inspired.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. Happy New Year to you a.. read more
Your love poems are undeniably exceptional--uniquely lovely, mellow as a dream, and soul-gratifying.
Dynamite, Sami!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and appreciation. You are appreciated as .. read more
I'm trying to correct the points to 100 - hope this works.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Many and many thank yous...:).....
Confuser

3 Years Ago

You are welcome. Just brilliant writing. Love it.
Brilliant! In my library. If I were to quote, it would be every line, what a marvel. What a wonderful writer you are. Thank you so much Sami. Just simply beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Confuser

3 Years Ago

Sorry, don't know how to correct, the 10 points - should be 100 - ad, google is interfering with re.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. What a marvelous review from a marvelous poet and friend. Just the visit is rnough. For I don't.. read more
This is my kind of poetry Sami.. just gorgeous my friend..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much Stella for this wonderful review and kind visit. All appreciated...:).......... read more
Long before time itself began you were her lover Sami. Her being womankind. Beautiful writing no chara

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true andwell articulated. Glad you like this romantic write. Take care...:)....
dear Sami... "long before the winnowing of the wind"
is a lovely caress of poetry. Your poem and the art
Is delicious like berries and ice cream. So romantic
and to be savored. truly... Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So glad you could enjoy and taste this treat. I'm honored when you visit. Be blessed...:)........ read more
Master of poets. Awesome love poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. You humble me by your lovely review and appreciation. You are too in your own right. Be blessed.. read more
Day Dreamer

3 Years Ago

:-) the pleasure is all mine.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:)...................
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Pax
you painted love as if merely breathing...
a love that keeps on blooming,
a muse who's always there, loving, caring for both hearts...
beautiful piece, my brother :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. So true and well articulated. You have graced me with your lovely visit and famed intellect. Th.. read more
I always enjoy other's views on romance and love in general as we all paint different pictures with our words. Wonderful to see what you have done here, so please, keep it up.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much beloved poet for this lovely review and kind words. Muchas Gracias...:)........ read more

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Added on July 20, 2014
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