Cage

Cage

A Poem by Cara

I hate my life,
and the way I grew to be.
I want to blame it on someone,
But there is no one but me.

I can't stand it anymore,
I'm screaming deep inside.
And my mouth never moves,
Am I really alive.

I don't mind being left alone,
It doesn't hurt at all.
Instead I drive them all away,
I like it even more.

I know it's wrong but i can't stop,
I trust no one at all.
I hate love and hope. and just
I hate hating it all

Why am I doing this,
When did I change?
I used to write happy stuff,
Now they took that away.

Can you see me or just my cage,
I'm locked right here inside.
Can't see my face nor myself,
When I look in the mirror each time.

Can you help me, can I change,
And be who I used to be.
Or will I risk it, then disappear,
And be stuck forever here.

© 2017 Cara



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I know many people believe that you can find good in every situation and it's all in your mind. That might be true but when you are going through some things in life it's hard to even look at the bright side of the morning...but it gets better, and when it does you can find that light even in the darkness of night!
I know it's too poetic :D, but that's something I truly believe in!
Thank you for sharing!


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

i also believe in what you said, you will always find the light
thank you for reading XD



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I know many people believe that you can find good in every situation and it's all in your mind. That might be true but when you are going through some things in life it's hard to even look at the bright side of the morning...but it gets better, and when it does you can find that light even in the darkness of night!
I know it's too poetic :D, but that's something I truly believe in!
Thank you for sharing!


Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

i also believe in what you said, you will always find the light
thank you for reading XD
Changing your life is hard.
"Can you help me can I change
And be back to who I used to be
Or will I risk it then disappear
And be stuck forever here"
To change your. Need to move, find new places to go and make great changes in your life. Thank you Cara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

i'm trying to go to new places, and i won't lose hope
thank you for reading
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

I hope you can and you are welcome.
I think it's not hard to feel like this too often by most of us but to bring ourselves back to positivity is what really takes an effort.. I agree with emipoemi about this write needing some changes here and there but there's no denying that you portrayed the emotions well.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

i agree too it is not hard to lose hope you slip and fall anytime whats hard is to stand back up and.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

You're welcome :)
This has potential. Such solemnity and a painful honesty accompany every line, but some of the wording to express what you really want to say within the rhythm you've set to the poem is kind of awkward. I have a number of notes to guide you on towards perfection for this piece, but I won't go into detail unless you are very much inclined to know them. This is a great start. I mean that. The first stanza is virtually golden! But the rest can't exactly match it, which is not so good for the poem itself.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

thank you, this really helped
i tried changing some of the things you said, would you check i.. read more
emipoemi

4 Months Ago

It reads a lot better now. Great changes. But there are some issues involving sound: Stanzas 3 and 4.. read more
Cara

4 Months Ago

ok ill try that
thnak you XD
First of all you fid a very good job by writing your feelings down here, it is a very good formula to feel lighter..we should not pity on ourselves, whatever happens we should remain same, being alone can also be treated positively, you don't know how cool and amazing you are, you just lost yourself find yourself again and be yourself..you writes some amazing stuff that's one of your best thing, whenever i feel like i am alone or depressed i just pray on my bed that tomorrow will be alright and with rise of the sun my depression or loneliness disappear..

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

your words are ver kind thank you ver much. and i'm really glad you enjoy reading my poems
i.. read more
Farhan Shaikh

4 Months Ago

Pleasure..
Wow, very powerful words! I really enjoy your writing and I believe it's very similar to my style. I will send a friend request I hope we can stay connected! Don't give up and stay strong!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

glad you enjoyed it and i approved the request few moments ago XD
very honestly scribbled..Intelligent as well.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

Thank you for reading
raw true honest and hopeful
i see your plea and hope
please keep writing you are very talented x

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cara

4 Months Ago

aww thank you XD i'm really glad you liked it ^.^

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